Great starts - I wish they were developed further, especially the second one. You are showing real potential in the screenplay unit so far, easily hitting MERIT level with your writing but with the occasional flash of distinction. Nothing we have done so far counts towards the qualification so go for distinctions - take care to learn to control the pace of your writing - we'll do a lot to practice this before we do the assessed pieces.
Great starts - I wish they were developed further, especially the second one. You are showing real potential in the screenplay unit so far, easily hitting MERIT level with your writing but with the occasional flash of distinction. Nothing we have done so far counts towards the qualification so go for distinctions - take care to learn to control the pace of your writing - we'll do a lot to practice this before we do the assessed pieces.
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